Thursday, 12 May 2016

Knowledge
Charlie and the Chocolate Factory - Roald Dahl
Where did the story take place
- Mr Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory
- The Bucket’s house
- The shop

Describe the  most prominent setting
The Chocolate factory - Chocolate Room
A chocolate river runs down the middle of the green valley. The grass is edible and tastes like mint. A great big waterfall sits halfway across the river, where chocolate rolls off the cliff crashing into a whirlpool of froth and spray. Dozens of pipes dangle down from the ceiling sucking up chocolate and sending it to where it is needed.


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  1. Anonymous24 May 2016 at 09:25

    Hi Fiona,
    I like the way you structured your writing nicely and it is very detailed. I like all your adjectives because it makes it more interesting. Have you seen the movie?
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    1. Anonymous25 May 2016 at 11:41

      Yes I have seen the movie and thank you for your feedback.

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